11.08.2009, 16:22
I wish you luck. My advice is to make a 12 minute movie...no longer. Forget making more "trailers".
You have some good technical Pluses in cinematography and editing. Get rid of the Blur-transitiion effect.
There is something hugely wrong with your Story-line. You start with text about the Battle of the Bulge (which was in Dec 1945), then you mention the 'biggest' day of the war as 5 July 1944...then you again refer to the "Invasion" (6 June 1944)...you show Russian IL2s, you mention that the action will be in the Netherlands, you show an attack on a railroad station (Netherlands????) with Mountains all around (Netherlands is FLAT). Yet, your movie title has to do with Normandy (in France). Makes no sense whatsoever. Sorry.
Again, I couldn't follow the story at all and had to shut off your trailer at about the 7 minute point...
Good Luck. Looking forward to seeing your final movie.
You have some good technical Pluses in cinematography and editing. Get rid of the Blur-transitiion effect.
There is something hugely wrong with your Story-line. You start with text about the Battle of the Bulge (which was in Dec 1945), then you mention the 'biggest' day of the war as 5 July 1944...then you again refer to the "Invasion" (6 June 1944)...you show Russian IL2s, you mention that the action will be in the Netherlands, you show an attack on a railroad station (Netherlands????) with Mountains all around (Netherlands is FLAT). Yet, your movie title has to do with Normandy (in France). Makes no sense whatsoever. Sorry.
Again, I couldn't follow the story at all and had to shut off your trailer at about the 7 minute point...
Good Luck. Looking forward to seeing your final movie.