Just my humble opinion: Footage looks good, with good atmosphere. I just would try to use one type of visual FX on the written text in one sequence, or keep the text style the same and use a fade in on the total and then use an effect.
Whatever happened to your movie "Heavens of Fire" for which you previously released a Trailer in 2008? Where can we download that full length movie? The trailer said it would be released in December 2008. Is "Eyes of the Enemy" just a new title/trailer for the same movie? Or are you releasing two movies this summer? Do you have a link to download or view the "Heavens of Fire" movie? I assume it will be downloadable since you said it would be an hour long....that would be a Large file to stream.
Here's your December trailer: