22.10.2008, 07:35
You have written a nice story and the pics are very good too.
There's just one small mistake:
Finns didn't have Brewsters in the Winter War, they came a couple months too late to fight there...
*edit*
I noticed another one, this one is even smaller and anyone can tell me I'm 'raping the dot' as we say in Finland... In Finnish air force flights were identified by numbers, such as 2 / HLeLv 24 meaning the secong flight of the squadron. So not the 'red flight'.
These corrections are only for historical accuracy for your possible (and well wished) future stories about this subject.
But anyway, keep it up! Thanks for the great story!
I have written a Finnish pilot's diary -short story myself and I liked this one a big lot.
There's just one small mistake:
Finns didn't have Brewsters in the Winter War, they came a couple months too late to fight there...
*edit*
I noticed another one, this one is even smaller and anyone can tell me I'm 'raping the dot' as we say in Finland... In Finnish air force flights were identified by numbers, such as 2 / HLeLv 24 meaning the secong flight of the squadron. So not the 'red flight'.
These corrections are only for historical accuracy for your possible (and well wished) future stories about this subject.
But anyway, keep it up! Thanks for the great story!
I have written a Finnish pilot's diary -short story myself and I liked this one a big lot.