[rossmum]

The screen itself is really nice, you need to cut back on the filters though. There's a difference between artful filter use and plain old abuse, and unfortunately not many people seem to know which is which. When you're using filters, a little is a lot, and sometimes if you mix a few on sensible settings you get a really nice result. Keep at it, you'll get the hang of it eventually - this is already an improvement over your last work.