[nuk3m]

ill start by saying i enjoyed "eyes of the enemy" a lot. i was hoping this "feature" length video would be even better.

watched the movie and heres my critique. be advised this is CONSTRUCTIVE criticism so please don't take it the wrong way.

First of all, there are some pretty AMAZING camera shots and angles in this. You have great talent with these (as also evident in 'eyes of the enemy'. The visuals are absolutely stunning. I like the beginning, with the shots of the letters. Very unique and well done. I do think the production could have been better though. The voice-overs and radio chatter are way too quiet. Despite some amazing camera angles described before, there is a lot of aimless flying around and repeated scenes for a 30 minute long film. Theres also no real flow to the story, a lot of random scenes in random places. Though I like your pick of score, the score suddenly stops and starts in certain places with no attempt at arrangement with the scenes. Once the battle starts, it gets pretty good, although if this is a story about two pilots from opposite sides, theres no real attempt at letting the audience know who is who and what is happening with them. I just see a bunch of airplanes flying around shooting at eachother. You say you lost data while making this, hopefully that explains a lot of this.

This has potential to be one of the best....Great camera work, but the production and storyline need help.

THx very much for the comment...and yeah before i was reading the last line...that u wrote..i was about to write you that...i've lost.........and that's true i know that there are planes..that are flyng by.-even to much..and we can't understand..who is who and the dialogs..are a pitty in the eyes of the enemy..i think the dialog is good..i've lost about 10 min of movie and those 10 min were the "material"that was made to full up the wholes in the movie it happens...but i think the story..is giving you emotions..I didn't understand where are u refering at the score?

thx again
ysydor