[WIP] Atomic Particles
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That was fantastic. I think the slanted ascension is great, but a tiny bit too soon. The under-glow for the mushroom head is too weak and too yellow, but that can't really be helped. The brightness factor needs to stay higher than average for a little while until the under-glow knocks out. the smoke was a little too white. It needs to be grayer, but the shock wave ground smoke can stay the same, but a little brown. If we made the ground dust the way the real thing was, it would look weird. Good luck. You've already gone farther than ever before. THANKS!!
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