[Tronald Dump]

Hi!

I've been piking up some work for my first skin (well second, but the first one went down the toilet) for Il-2, a generic FW-190F-8 based on the one in this link:
http://hsgalleries.com/fw190f8ba_1.htm

Now, I don't know if the colors are all exactly correct, but what I'm looking for is some general input for how I can make it better.
What do you guys think?
Needs more detail, or something else?

I feel kinda stuck, but aren't completely satisfied with the result.


Here are some screenshots, and if you'd like to see any other angles or better ones just ask.

[Ali]

It's looking good!

The first thing that catches my eye is the rivets. In my opinion they need to be turned down a fair bit, even in combat aircraft they're not really so stark. Also the exhaust stain follows the airflow around the wing so in my opinion it sould not reach quite so high up the fusealage. There is a noticeable curve usually.

[Tronald Dump]

It's looking good!

The first thing that catches my eye is the rivets. In my opinion they need to be turned down a fair bit, even in combat aircraft they're not really so stark. Also the exhaust stain follows the airflow around the wing so in my opinion it sould not reach quite so high up the fusealage. There is a noticeable curve usually.

Good point!
I'll look into these things and post the result ones I've changed 'em.