Need someone who speaks English well
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Hi all, i need your assistance. One good man makes new server commander for his own project. And, he needs to put some chat messages inside the code. but it should be in good english. i have already made it but i am not sure my English is good. Please read it and if you see any mistakes (or you think it should be written in other way) - fix it. Many thanks.


Probable deliberate disconnection

Team *TEAM* has lost one plane

Warning *TEAM* team! 6 planes *PLANE* left.

Warning! Team *TEAM* is losing planes at *SECTOR*

Team *TEAM* - one pilot is killed.

Warning! Team *TEAM* left 5 pilots only.

Warning *TEAM* team! Ground units are under attack at *SECTOR*

Warning! Team *TEAM* is losing planes at *SECTOR*

Warning *TEAM* team! Base - *SECTOR*: last target *SECTOR* requires covering.

WARNING! Mission will be stopped in 50 sec
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